Fodors Haiku...c'mon you know you want to
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Andrea,<BR><BR>You make excellent points. I would like to add that TRADITIONAL Haiku is in Japanese, so I guess nothing here fits the bill.<BR><BR>Pompous,<BR><BR>I like your seasonal reference, but your second line gives you a 5-6-5 pattern. I'll just mentally insert the word "must" at the front of the second line and give you full credit.
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You make excellent points. I would like to add that TRADITIONAL Haiku is in Japanese.<BR><BR>Pompous,<BR><BR>I like your seasonal reference, but your second line gives you a 5-6-5 pattern. I'll just mentally insert the word "must" at the front of the second line and give you full credit.<BR><BR><BR>
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<BR>My feelings are hurt.<BR>Tried defending those attacked.<BR>Called an ass, I think.<BR><BR>Eek - I was just trying to defend those who had posted perfectly fun poems and who were attacked by people claiming to be defending the sacred Haiku, but who weren't doing any better themselves.<BR><BR>Life without Fodors; <BR>Monotonous, bleak, and dull. <BR>What WOULD I do at work?<BR>
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a 1, and a 2, and a 3 ... this is becoming silly. bad poetry fitted to 5-7-5 or 5-6-5 or whatever is still bad poetry. nothing emotional and intelligent emreges from these haiku wannabes. nothing to remember and why would one.<BR><BR>Thought is gone for good<BR>Pedantics reigns supremely<BR>Time to break for lunch<BR><BR>Hmmmm, maybe ~~~ but no! Tuna fish on rye with mayo is too many sillybells.
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x<BR><BR>And it is important for you to have a memorable experience on this internet Bb concerning Haiku?<BR><BR>That is so distorted. <BR><BR>Your insecurity tries to make people feel bad because they didn't write Haiku up to your standards. What a prima donna.<BR><BR>You have to be 18 years old. What a child. A spoiled silly child.
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Did like your work, Me. But whoops, either it's naptime or go get the meds! prima donna - insecure - 18 year old (don't I wish!) - spoiled silly child (don't I wish!). Yes, lets make me prez of fodors haiku, we'll upgrade asap and ban the bad stuff! but if it's all the same, I won't shove it, and I'll try not to "suck big time dirt bag" - now that's the start of a haiku, but it's not that good. I count 5 dumb syllables. I'd call that caveman haiku, maybe 5,000 b.c, cave wall stuff. Just bad luck it survived. See, already I'm functioning as a prez and doing some value added. I'm on the job!