Fodors Haiku...c'mon you know you want to

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Jul 29th, 2002, 07:54 PM

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Yamamoto go revoke your visa, kick your can crawl back under bridge

Jul 29th, 2002, 08:35 PM

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pup

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ok puss,pup will try again

Jul 29th, 2002, 08:41 PM

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puss

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You can do it Pup I have lots of faith in you. The puppy poet.

Jul 29th, 2002, 09:03 PM

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this is kind of fun why does someone always whine every where I go

Jul 30th, 2002, 03:54 AM

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A pair: No MPD. Not even one personali- ty. Best wishes, me. Better to laugh at oneself. Petty types laugh at others. Burma Shave.

Jul 30th, 2002, 04:20 AM

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At Fodor's I roost. Will not get fired from work. Slaves have to be sold. ----- Haggis, oh haggis. Gagging at the thought of it. Why is it in tube? ----- Gypsies near our tour. I stop to read their bright signs. Have you seen my purse? ----- Mephisto or Clarks? Maybe Birkenstock or SAS? Just so they're not white! ----- Are my arms covered? Cathedral at twelve o'clock. Forgot I'm in shorts!

Jul 30th, 2002, 04:38 AM

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Eagle soars swiftly my heart would fly away too earthbound I must be

Jul 30th, 2002, 04:47 AM

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What a load of crap this is My 7 yr old son can do better

Jul 30th, 2002, 04:57 AM

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non

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Better than you Art Probably.

Jul 30th, 2002, 05:07 AM

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Happy is the pup who travels everywhere free his mama loves him.

Jul 30th, 2002, 06:08 AM

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Even in Haiku Rex thinks only of himself This is nothing new

Jul 30th, 2002, 06:16 AM

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joe

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Uncle Sam, Not Found Can Find No One To Cut Down His Poor Spelling Abounds

Jul 30th, 2002, 01:00 PM

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Jul 30th, 2002, 02:11 PM

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puss

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Oh Pup you did it I knew you had it in you! Much better than Art

Jul 30th, 2002, 02:16 PM

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Haiku

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Wasted efforts here trying to be so clever alas not to be

Jul 30th, 2002, 04:14 PM

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Kelsey

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To take a bow: Bitter jealousy and anonymity too Mudslingers diet

Jul 30th, 2002, 04:23 PM

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Lucy

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Seen in the harbour a whale frolicking freely. Beautiful Sydney

Jul 30th, 2002, 04:33 PM

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Rocky

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Wafting smoke brings smile - Memories last forever - A'dam, déjà vu ~

Jul 31st, 2002, 06:25 AM

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Started observing Did not want to interfere But correctors need correcting Ok, so I'm the first to admit that I am a HORRIBLE haiku writer. But I had to jump in to defend the non-5-7-5 writers, particularly from those posters who were both wrong AND vitriolic. A TRADITIONAL haiku has two elements: a 5-7-5 structure, and a seasonal reference. There are many, many other guidelines about what makes a haiku a "real" haiku, but 5-7-5 and a seasonal reference are both necessary-but-not-sufficient elements of a TRADITIONAL haiku. It doesn't make much sense to insist on one element without even mentioning the other. There are, however, probably MORE non-traditional haikus in existance than traditional ones (even among "real" poets in Japan). So, in that vein£¬ I will try again£º Going to Paris Is there anything to see£¿ Can I wear tennies£¿

Jul 31st, 2002, 07:12 AM

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Pompous asses and

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Complying with the seasonal reference requirement: Pedantics always put in their two cents here. Runs from June to May.

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