I'm spending September in Shanghai and west to WuHan. Would love feedback/help on hotels, activities. As it says, I plan to spend the first night in Shanghai at Dazhong Airport Hotel and hope to have my train tickets delivered there. Will it work?

I'll return to Shanghai at the end of the trip in late September and would love a smaller Shanghai hotel in french concession.

My initial itinerary is to fly into Shanghai Sept 6 and spend the first night at Dazhong Airport Hotel
just to get my head back in order and have train tickets delivered.
Then high speed train to WuHan
7-10 3 nights at Asia Hotel in Wuhan.
10-14 4 nights at Skywells in Wuyuan
14-17 3 nights with Wildhomestay in Yingchuan Village
17-20 3 nights at shaoxing luxun native place youth hostel in Shaoxing hiking
20-23 3 nights in Merchant Marco Hotel in Hangzhou
23-26 3 nights at Hotel Soul Suzhou in Suzhou day trips to water towns Tongli Zhouzhuang
26-29 3 days at Kevin's Old House in the french concession shanghai.
this gets me up to Sept 29.

I fly out of PVG at noon Oct 3.
any ideas greatly appreciated. I do not speak Chinese.

I assume that you have been to China before.
I am not sure that you can book a room at the Dazhong hotel. If you can then having tickets delivered the is ok.
If you have more time around Shanghai at the end, you can consider Nanjing and Yangzhou. Understand that you'll be t the worst of the National holidays.