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jenviolin Jun 2nd, 2002 03:27 AM

Help: 'Manufactory'!
 
I'm translating a tourist brochure about Delftware and would be grateful for your opinions on the word 'manufactory'. One of the delftware producers here in Delft, the Netherlands, wants to use 'manufactory' to describe their business, but I think that tourists won't think it's a real word (which it is, but it sounds archaic). 'Factory' sounds too industrial, and they want to stress the fact that the Delftware is handmade. What would you think if you read "Royal Dutch Delftware Manufactory"? THANKS for your help!

Daniel Jun 2nd, 2002 03:39 AM

Janet Gleeson use the word factory in her book about the history of Porzellan-Manufaktur Meissen ("The Arcanum").

xx Jun 2nd, 2002 03:40 AM

It sounds very awkward to me. Could you use producer's or Craftsman or crafter's of RDD

Julie Jun 2nd, 2002 05:31 AM

I agree. I certainly wouldn't use 'manufactory'. <BR><BR>Why not just RDD Pottery?

whats Jun 2nd, 2002 05:59 AM

I guess they like "manu-factory" because it literally means "hand-makery". <BR>"Craftsmen" (in plural) or "Crafters" sounds good to me. But I would not know what RDD means.<BR>How about "Atelier"? Or "Masters"?<BR>Good luck. It's not easy to find a word that has the right meaning in every english speaking culture.

jenviolin Jun 2nd, 2002 11:31 PM

Thanks for your comments! How about in British or Australian English - does 'manufactory' sound right to you blokes & sheilas?

Maggie Jun 3rd, 2002 03:27 AM

I would have thought "hand produced" would be a good description.<BR>Definately not Manufactory!<BR>Regards<BR>Maggie.

Maggie Jun 3rd, 2002 03:28 AM

Sorry, I should have said<BR>"Hand produced Royal Dutch Delftware"<BR>Regards<BR>Maggie.

Ruth Jun 3rd, 2002 04:09 AM

I agree with Maggie - manufactory doesn't sound any more "hand-made" than factory - just an archaeic form of factory.

Sandy Jun 3rd, 2002 04:15 AM

For a tourist brochure? Hand-crafted.

jenviolin Jun 3rd, 2002 04:48 AM

Thanks, everybody! Remember, it has to be a noun describing a place or process, so 'hand-crafted' is out, as is 'craftsmen'. What do you call a place where handmade products are professionally produced? What do they call the glass-producing places in Murano? Are they 'factories'?

Sandy Jun 3rd, 2002 05:09 AM

okay--<BR>atelier (defined as an artist's or designer's studio or workroom) or workshop.

Patrick Jun 3rd, 2002 05:12 AM

If I read "factory" I might still picture it being handmade there. But the word "manufactory" sounds more mechanical, or assembly line -- like it would be less handmade.

joan Jun 3rd, 2002 05:36 AM

But it sounds like Manufactory is part of the proper name of the company. If so, how can you not use the full correct company name? You could still describe the product as "hand-made" or "hand-crafted".

Ruth Jun 3rd, 2002 06:25 AM

I think studio could sound the right note for (British) English speakers. "Studio pottery" is a fairly well known concept of hand-made or decorated ceramics made in a traditional manner, often associated with a particular designer or school.

Bel Jun 3rd, 2002 07:03 AM

Manufactory, while a real and accurate word, is too impersonal, and seemingly none of the other options are appropriate. I would probably go with "workshop" or "foundry." Either sounds more "hands-on" than manufactory.

jenviolin Jun 3rd, 2002 11:19 AM

Thanks a million! You've all given me enough ammunition to convince them to drop 'Manufactory'. I'll have to see if they accept something other than 'factory'. Since it's a pretty big place, studio, atelier and workshop may not sound large enough. Anyway you all were a big help!

D.B. Jun 3rd, 2002 11:52 AM

GmbH (goods made by hand).<BR><BR>"Royal Dutch Delftware Works"<BR><BR>

whats Jun 3rd, 2002 12:23 PM

<BR>&gt;&gt;Royal Dutch Delftware Works&gt;&gt;<BR>Good choice DB! I think that's the winner. Sounds impressive and serious, without implying machines.<BR>Jenviolin: I hope your Dutch friends will agree. Het klinkt ontzettend goed.

Sheila Jun 6th, 2002 03:49 PM

This has been bugging me for days.<BR><BR>I finally came up with "Hand Crafted Royal Dutch Delftware"<BR><BR>for the description. I still can't come up with anything for the buidling


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