<BR>SUMMER in Fargo --<BR>mosquitos, golf and grilling.<BR>Four months till WINTER.<BR><BR>Love to read Fodors.<BR>Even when I'm trapped at work.<BR>Dreaming of FALL trips.<BR>

blow job....heh, heh, heh...

New England auturm<BR>Leaves shimmer in the sunlight<BR>Yellow, red, and orange<BR><BR>

Excellent ncgirl - are there any others out there ready to submit a good haiku? I love my job! I get to read wonderful poetry.

Come on people show me the money. You can do better than this!<BR><BR>I read a few Haiku from 4 year olds that were better than this. I know you can do it...let's go.

You people are pitiful. NO ONE can Haiku any better than this poor showing?<BR><BR>I would be ashamed if I were you.

Hey, it's my job people. Let's get on the stick and Haiku. I have reviews to write and people ( important people ) to see.<BR><BR><BR>Let me see what you've got.

I want to update my haiku<BR><BR>New England autumn<BR>Leaves shimmer in sunlight's glow<BR>Yellow, red, and orange<BR><BR>Addicted to this<BR>haiku writing oh so fun<BR>please use active verbs

That sucks to put it mildly. You should of stopped on the first attempt.

legs feel too hot now<BR>summer heat is rising fast<BR>putting on my shorts

thank you for your post<BR>I'll file it accordingly<BR>in the trash barrel

<BR>don't look at me now<BR>I have pizza on my mouth<BR>tomatos are ripe

ncgirl, that was excellent - and don't pay any attention to all the fake x's who say nasty things. I'm the self-appointed prez, and I liked your work! Those others are naybobs, nattering their negativeism, so without imgaination they glomb onto an x!

<BR>forget the haiku<BR>think instead<BR>hari-kari<BR><BR>"active verbs"?<BR>do you mean <BR>action verbs imbecile?

What's "imgaination'?

English major - no<BR>Computer geek writes haiku<BR>just for fun of it<BR><BR>Anyway, I thought<BR>"active verb," was the right choice<BR>slept though most of school

Art, you have none! Silence! And leave the nice people like ncgirl alone.

<BR>light shines in my face<BR>wake up sleeping one its light<BR>kiss me again now<BR><BR>

<BR>My hair wraps your face<BR>not now come to the window<BR>watch the sailboats glide

Posting to Fodor's,<BR>I share a travel moment.<BR>Now I will get flamed.