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Fodors Haiku...c'mon you know you want to
europe this summer<BR>in pink jogging suit so crisp<BR>and white joggers too
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The poor mad doctor<BR>wants instant "friends" for travel,<BR>but pisses off all.
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People doing whatever<BR>they think is in<BR>so as not to look uncool.
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Even if it is<BR>totally ridiculous<BR>but hey I pierced my nipple too.
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What a bunch of<BR>ignorant jackasses<BR>trying hard to stay up.
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Let's all get a tattoo<BR>cause i think it's in<BR>that's what we do
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is there anything<BR>dumber than this stuff<BR>people desperate to be cool
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ignorant, jealous <BR>fools spoil the enjoyment for<BR>the real travelers
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<BR>some cry boo hoo hoo<BR>when mean censor chops away<BR>take marbles and go!
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Foo goo doo<BR>Oh light I see<BR>more for the less fortunate
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There's no need to read<BR>Posts that lead to crankiness:<BR>Plenty of choice here.
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business class is where<BR>I aspire to be. will you<BR>rescue me from hell.
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silliness personified<BR>is this attempt<BR>by people to be in
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It's hard to be "in" <BR>When you, like Lou, do not know<BR>What a haiku is.
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These are not haikus, but foolish attempts.
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kenzo does not like<BR>my attempt at haiku what<BR>ever shall I do.
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Then teach us haiku,<BR>Kenzo, our master poet.<BR>We yearn to learn well.
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Wow, Lou, how could you be so uncool and NOT know how to Haiku. EVERYONE knows how to Haiku.
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Ken can cool off now.<BR>It's just a silly website;<BR>No need to get upset!
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Peace on the forum.<BR>We contemplate our haikus.<BR>That we may improve.
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On eating blood oranges from the Campo De' Fiori market in Rome...<BR><BR>Silent shrunken sun<BR>Bleeding passion, flush of dusk<BR>Tasting red sunsets
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what a joyous thread<BR>so inspiring, pure and true<BR>let us celebrate
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How do you conjugate Haiku? Is it:<BR>I Haiku<BR>You Haiku<BR>We Haiku<BR>They Haiku<BR>Is this a Haiku?
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I love Jen's haiku<BR>it is sensual and cool<BR>congratulations
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5 in the first line<BR>7 in the middle<BR>5 again the third
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It's so deep isn't it. And to think you know how to do this.
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I'm so impressed.
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Friends are good to have<BR>Making friends is good for your heart<BR>My friends keep me sane.
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No one is trying<BR>to impress random strangers.<BR>Good haiku is rare.
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In distant valleys, <BR>swept with rain, a kindred wind<BR>whispers Ooh La la.
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Shivers down my spine<BR>is what I get while reading<BR>Jen's gorgeous haiku!
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After eating lobster in Sperlonga, Italy...<BR><BR>In China blue bowls <BR> yellow lemon, rose petals<BR>tracing wet circles.
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Gentle evening light<BR>Families strolling, playing<BR>Sunset Champs de Mars<BR>
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well done poet Sue <BR>you give jen competition.<BR>excellent haiku
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Upon leaving the board to get some sleep...<BR><BR>Parole belle<BR>dalla gente bella ma<BR>devo partire.<BR><BR>You guys are great! Buona notte. :o)
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Good night and sweet dreams<BR>to our master of haiku Jen<BR>Buona notte and grazie
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]<BR>Friends leave tomorrow for France<BR>I'm stuck here while they go away<BR>Alors, je suis tres triste.
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Anymore?
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Wow dudes, you are like, so cool with this Haiku. How do you learn to do this. It sems so very difficult. What is your secret?<BR><BR>No, I'm serious.
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If I realy could haiku<BR>I would be reading this in Honshu<BR>now I stay with you
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