![]() |
In Awe is in awe<BR>of the haiku on this board<BR>you too can haiku.<BR><BR>Syllables in all<BR>is seventeen. Three lines<BR>of 5-7-5.<BR>
|
Stars bring wonder<BR>my eyes scan the sky<BR>for a love long forgotten
|
Sweltering mistral<BR>Tramontana, oh hot air!<BR>But wait! It's just Rex.<BR><BR>Lively loons on lake<BR>Winey, briney tales of glee<BR>Elvira's loonies.<BR><BR>Flag half-mast today<BR>Uncle Sam at half-mast too<BR>Viagra, U S.
|
yakimoto's<BR>failed attempt to inflate<BR>limped home unsung<BR>
|
Mrs Yakimoto isn't happy about this development.
|
Who is this Rick Steves<BR>you all keep talking about?<BR>Buy my guide book please.<BR>
|
A troll emerges<BR>Stroking her furry feline<BR>Ah pleasure at last
|
Moon light among us<BR>who would know to look at it<BR>when love casts shadows
|
Lee Mann: It's so simple, but you don't get it, Mann. 5-7-5. That's syllables - is that clear now, or is that too complicated for you?
|
Beatles sang of love<BR>sweet remembrance to my soul<BR>will you hold my hand
|
He got to you didn't he Yamimoto. <BR><BR>Heh,heh,heh...
|
Hey Yamamoto or is it Yakimoto? It's just a silly rhyme, don't get so uptight. Geez...Louise.
|
Marilyn my dear<BR>please write in haiku only<BR>otherwise leave please
|
Yes... YamiTomato, why so hot headed? It's only a game. Not a classroom, for us at least.
|
No, Marilyn, it's NOT just a rhyme (in fact it doesn't even have to rhyme), and that's the point. Don't tell me YOU don't get it, either? Boy, there are more stupid people on this forum than I imagined.
|
Haiku Police<BR><BR>Make me leave......Hee, Hee, hee...
|
Is it Yamamoto or Yakimoto? <BR><BR>Are you having a dissassociative reaction here?
|
Try that in haiku, Ken. Go ahead. <BR><BR>There are other cultures besides Europe, you know, and they have traditions, and ones that should be respected. Haiku has nothing to do with rhyming. Most 3rd graders at my school (in America) know that.<BR><BR>Give it a whirl, Ken. Go ahead.
|
Now, now my children<BR>no more fighting in this thread<BR>show us your talent.
|
Wow, Yamamoto, you are so smart. You know all about the mysterious and ancient art form of Haiku. You are really special...really.....you are.
|
| All times are GMT -8. The time now is 04:12 PM. |